Wednesday 3 October 2012

No harm done poem

No harm done
As i went out
 the other day,
my head fell off 
and rolled away.

But when i noticed
 it was gone
 i picked it up
 and put it on. 
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13 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 16:43

    wierd poem

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  2. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 17:00

    Okkkkkkkkk......

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  3. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 18:12

    I like this poem, because it has rhyme in it and it is funny, however you need capital I's.

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  4. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 20:37

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  5. Anonymous4 October 2012 at 13:07

    thank you

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  6. Anonymous4 October 2012 at 21:22

    Ha ha I loved it!

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  7. Anonymous5 October 2012 at 16:40

    that was brilltastic
    xx

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  8. Anonymous5 October 2012 at 18:01

    Well done! From Emily Payne (old year 6)

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  9. Anonymous5 October 2012 at 18:02

    Well done that was really good, but a little weird. (From Emily Payne)

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  10. Anonymous6 October 2012 at 16:22

    Yes Rhiannon very good

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  11. Anonymous9 October 2012 at 17:55

    It's great! I tried to rhyme a day ago but I ended up with I sat on the couch but Mum took it away
    " Hey " I say!

    OK UM. .

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  12. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 14:07

    this is really good but can your head really roll of

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  13. Anonymous15 February 2013 at 11:27

    I love this poem! One of the pupils in my school read it to me after hearing a Dr Seuss story, you made me laugh! Thank you! Ms Buchan, Roe Green Junior School.

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