Tuesday 2 October 2012

Cat poem

Some cats are big
Some cats are small
Some cats have no fur at all
Some cats are old
Some cats are young
But my cat has a very long tounge!

24 comments:

  1. really good funny and I like the repetition

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  2. i like your poem it is relly good and i love cats

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  3. very good funny and I like the repetition

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  4. it is great now you have to do a poem about his mate.

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  5. very good rime well keep it up

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  6. this is very good.i like cats to. keep up with the good work 8)

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  8. Fantastic! Your cat is like my cat, a very long tounge. As well as this poem, you should write more well done.

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  9. I like the fact you have used rhyme in this poem.I'm not sure, but do you have to have puntuaition after each line?

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  10. this is awesome I think you added a little humor which i love

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  11. I like this poem, because I used to have a cat. I think it would be nice if you used some different openers though.

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  12. I loveeeee this poem, beause i love cats and i have 2 cats. you need new ideas for the start of each line.

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  13. i love your poem its really really cool

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  14. i love your poem it is relly cool

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  15. i love your poem its relly cool

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  16. i love your poem

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  17. ithink your poem

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  18. wow that was realy good nice rimes to the last sentence was funy so keep it up

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  19. like it eleanor i know you like cats

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  20. Thanks I do lovveeee cats! :)

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  21. I love the rhyme in this poem. It is quite funny.

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  22. Well done! That was a very nice poem. (from Emily Payne)

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  23. yes really good eloner i know your lovects

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