Tuesday 2 October 2012

lets sit down pome

walking down  the high street with family and friends asking mum shall we sit down and have a drink no walking for mils can we sit down now no going in and out of shops asking again yes drank a hot drink oh hert my lip too hot so we went home.

6 comments:

  1. that is very good katie i like it

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  2. < awesome i would've wanted a drink that was great do more of these poems.

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  3. tow things hurt is spelled wrong and miles is wrong, other than that welldone

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  4. I like this, however I think there might be some spelling mistakes in there.

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  5. I like yoour pome but I could not read it porrply

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