Tuesday 2 October 2012

doughnut song

Doughnut song


Doughnuts come in many shapes and sizes they come in many colours too,
purple, red, pink, and blue!!! 
When get home from school they'll be on the table for you!!! 
Jammy doughnuts I think are the nicest, don't come in many colours though, not purple, red, pink or blue! 
When you get home from school they'll be on the table for youuuuuuuu!!!!

17 comments:

  1. by me and elise xxx

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  2. An interesting song. On giggling at the song title, my current year 6 class then insisted on singing your song, they seemed to enjoy themselves. Easily pleased!

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  3. An interesting song. On giggling at the title, my current year 6 class insisted on singing your song. I used your blog as a way of demonstrating 'how to leave a useful comment' for the writer, or in this case, songwriter.

    Keep blogging
    Mr Bradford, Catton Grove Primary, Year 6B

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  4. the song is verry catchy and i like the use of colour.

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  5. very good nice and coulorfal keep uwith the good work

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  6. funny but I have spotted a mistake
    when get home from school

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  7. Very funny great job you did very well.

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  8. i like jammy doughnuts and blue,red ones :)

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  9. very good like great song keep it up.

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  10. i love this because i love doughnuts too

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  11. I like jammy doughnuts, but my favorite doughnuts are sugar. Fantastic song :)

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  12. that was fantastic it was really funny... ha ha ha

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  13. great poem i love doughnuts
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  14. I llloooovvveeeee this poem, because I love doughnuts. I think you can improve it though so the colors are not so bright, because it is hard to read.

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  15. i like your poem its relly cool

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  16. yes that was a very good one indeed

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