the castle
one day i built a castle
it was wonderful and tall
i built it from my colored blocks
and soon had used them all
but then i saw my playful pup
was giving it a stare
i said don't knock it over
you simply wouldn't dare
he wagged his tail and winked at me
as if to say t won't
and as i left to eat my lunch
i said to him well don't
when i came back the scene was new
it really made me frown
in spite of what i'd said to him
he'd knock my castle down
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ReplyDeleteThat was really good Katie . You do really good poems
ReplyDeleteThis is good, although you need to make your i's into I's.
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