Monday 1 October 2012

poem

my tummy is full with cup cakes

feel massive
tummy's full
just ate loads
of junk and 
cakes i will be
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11 comments:

  1. cool but its like the chessey puff poem though but its really good

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    1. yes that is a really good poem indeed(I should really do one myself)

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  2. great i think i should do one

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  3. maybe you could take off the pink because it hurts my eyes

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  4. hope u get well

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  5. I like your poem!!!

    please try and do a little bit more wriiting please.

    still like it!!!

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  6. nice and put more on the blog :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :.

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  7. great not much but that will pass not to say its junk :) :)

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  8. WOW this poem is really good not just because i love cupcakes. Next time dont highlight your writing in pink.

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  9. I think this would be easier to read if you had not high-lighted it.

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  10. i like your poem it makes me happy

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