Sunday 30 September 2012

eating

i am sitting hear watching Doctor who scoffing   my face with a box heroes how lovely now i feel sick

 
please writ or comment thanx

5 comments:

  1. haha, same but with lindors...MMMMMMMM

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  2. You are missing some punctuaition and there are some spelling mistakes.

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  3. you need to put some puntuation in your work

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  4. you need to put some punctuation in your work.

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