lets sit down pome
walking down the high street with family and friends asking mum shall we sit down and have a drink no walking for mils can we sit down now no going in and out of shops asking again yes drank a hot drink oh hert my lip too hot so we went home.
that is very good katie i like it
ReplyDelete< awesome i would've wanted a drink that was great do more of these poems.
ReplyDeletetow things hurt is spelled wrong and miles is wrong, other than that welldone
ReplyDeleteI like this, however I think there might be some spelling mistakes in there.
ReplyDeleteI like yoour pome but I could not read it porrply
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