Doughnut song
Doughnuts come in many shapes and sizes they come in many colours too,
purple, red, pink, and blue!!!
When get home from school they'll be on the table for you!!!
Jammy doughnuts I think are the nicest, don't come in many colours though, not purple, red, pink or blue!
When you get home from school they'll be on the table for youuuuuuuu!!!!
by me and elise xxx
ReplyDeletegreat song
ReplyDeleteAn interesting song. On giggling at the song title, my current year 6 class then insisted on singing your song, they seemed to enjoy themselves. Easily pleased!
ReplyDeleteAn interesting song. On giggling at the title, my current year 6 class insisted on singing your song. I used your blog as a way of demonstrating 'how to leave a useful comment' for the writer, or in this case, songwriter.
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Mr Bradford, Catton Grove Primary, Year 6B
the song is verry catchy and i like the use of colour.
ReplyDeletevery good nice and coulorfal keep uwith the good work
ReplyDeletefunny but I have spotted a mistake
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Very funny great job you did very well.
ReplyDeletei like jammy doughnuts and blue,red ones :)
ReplyDeletevery good like great song keep it up.
ReplyDeletei love this because i love doughnuts too
ReplyDeleteI like jammy doughnuts, but my favorite doughnuts are sugar. Fantastic song :)
ReplyDeletethat was fantastic it was really funny... ha ha ha
ReplyDeletegreat poem i love doughnuts
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I llloooovvveeeee this poem, because I love doughnuts. I think you can improve it though so the colors are not so bright, because it is hard to read.
ReplyDeletei like your poem its relly cool
ReplyDeleteyes that was a very good one indeed
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