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I really like this as you've asked the public what should happen next. I think you can improve by adding more detail for the first paragraph.
It was alright but I think you could make it a bit longer
nice ideas but it should be a bit longer
i like the idea that you asked what happened next, but can you make it longer. i cant wait for the next bit
I really like this as you've asked the public what should happen next. I think you can improve by adding more detail for the first paragraph.
ReplyDeleteIt was alright but I think you could make it a bit longer
ReplyDeletenice ideas but it should be a bit longer
ReplyDeletei like the idea that you asked what happened next, but can you make it longer. i cant wait for the next bit
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